Ten days
Nine nights
Spent watching our beloved guests
Smile, laugh,
Spreading warmth
As the dolls adorning 5 beautiful steps
Smile back at us
Running to and fro, attending to our guests
Whilst stealing glanced at our precious idols.
Ten days, nine nights
Collections of dozens of gifts
More than five dozens of people have come
And more than five dozens of smiles brought home.
Ten days, nine nights
Over a hundred steps we've seen
Five steps displayed
This year a step to the next
Next year we step up our game.
Ten days, nine nights
Today, they come to an end
The dolls packed away in the loft,
Don't fret - there's only a little more than
Three hundred and fifty days left. :)
Super Shriyan Fantastic.Excellent.God bless you my dear and always with you in all ur step.Anbudan Viji Patti
ReplyDeleteWonderful! your poem shows the grace of Goddess Saraswati for you. We get Happiness from Hospitality and Humbleness we show.you have expressed it very well with good ending.The Devine Ten days and nine nights our traditions gives us positive energy.
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Pushpa Patti
Wonderful writeup Shriyan darling. Nicely articulated. Let all the God's who were in your drawing room all these nine days shower their blessings to you - from the loaft now.
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