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Eclipsed

 Moon: 

I shine every night 

Though, once a month, I take a break 

But I'm seen regularly, 

And it's not a big deal. 

Few stop by 

To marvel at me. 

But what about the others - 

Can they even see?

And tonight is the night 

A shadow shall be cast upon me 

I hope no one notices - 

My brief moments without glory. 

Oh, but who am I kidding? 

Of course, when I'm humiliated 

In the vast night sky 

Just me, and an eery shadow upon me 

That 

That is when the humans 

Choose to gaze at me. 

And then, to say I am weak

And I'm always overruled by 

The sun, and shadows, and clouds? 

That is not fair. 


But the truth that the moon does not know 

Is that our little downfalls 

Are what define us. 

They're the little things that make us 

Better -

Perfection isn't a thing; but realism is. 

Someone who is perfect cannot be likeable -

But someone with flaws has more personality. 

And who knows -

When you fail, people may not exactly cast 

Judging looks at you - 

They might be looks of wonder. 

The little things we think are downfalls 

Might imply something else 

To different people - 

Something beautiful. 

So your shine 

Is your fame

And your eclipse 

Makes your frame  

You.


Comments

  1. Great. lunar Eclipse or Eclipse is a matter of mind. It is short time. No matter. But the earth watches it quietly with high esteem. Because it is the one which gives light in the night which is switched off by some one and slowly the sky becomes darker . It will again switched on after sometime and slowly Moon comes out with bright and beautiful. Similarly , if a man come across various problems and overshadowed by troubles and go into darkness , definitely the same man will one day rise like a Phoenix! That is reality!*Wait for light to clear our mind!
    wait for Light indeed!

    Babu Thatha

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  2. Movement and rotation of Sun ,moon ,earth may cause eclipse.The science and the shadow are true still it gives a true message through your poem . What a thought and comparison Shriyandhaa.excellant writing.keep it up.
    From
    Pushpa patti

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  3. Great attempt by the young Shriya
    She cares so much for all and empathize with the moon in this poem to analyse the comment from various ill informed observers
    It's an Excellent experience from the young mind
    Congratulations to all of you
    From Sathyanarayanan Uncle

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  4. I am able to visualise the moon’s heart through you. But isn't he the night king. We gaze upon his every phase and wait for him after amavasa. Isn't he the big one who is cool and surrounded by stars in the vast sky giving us light. Hi moon we love you . They can cover you only few hours.
    See you soon

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  5. Hi Shriyandha, so proud to read this poem that has been coined by a young and fresh mind.Stunned by your analysis and your comparison with human behaviour.
    Awesome ...Best wishes to you dear kuttyma.
    From Pushkala

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  6. Beautiful. Especially I like that "perception on perfection"

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  7. Sriyanthaa's level of perception is amazing.
    Our blessings to her πŸ™Œ
    From
    Kailasam uncle

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  8. Wonderful Shriyan. Nicely articulated. God bless you.

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  9. Just as waxing & waning are two different phases of the same moon, so are the pains & Joys part of the same Nature.....
    If winter comes, is Spring far behind?
    Best attemptπŸ‘Œ.........Savi Patti ( pushpa Patti's friend)


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  10. Very good composition by Shriyandhaa!
    Young mind's observation is very clear. Convey my Congrats to herπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ’πŸ₯°
    From
    Savithri Aunty

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  11. Excellent write up Shriyandhaa keep rocking.

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  12. Excellent Shriyandha..In the first part you imagined yourself as Moon and in the second part you have compared ups and downs in life with that of an eclipse...out of the box thinking ..Keep it up and keep writing...

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