Moon:
I shine every night
Though, once a month, I take a break
But I'm seen regularly,
And it's not a big deal.
Few stop by
To marvel at me.
But what about the others -
Can they even see?
And tonight is the night
A shadow shall be cast upon me
I hope no one notices -
My brief moments without glory.
Oh, but who am I kidding?
Of course, when I'm humiliated
In the vast night sky
Just me, and an eery shadow upon me
That
That is when the humans
Choose to gaze at me.
And then, to say I am weak
And I'm always overruled by
The sun, and shadows, and clouds?
That is not fair.
But the truth that the moon does not know
Is that our little downfalls
Are what define us.
They're the little things that make us
Better -
Perfection isn't a thing; but realism is.
Someone who is perfect cannot be likeable -
But someone with flaws has more personality.
And who knows -
When you fail, people may not exactly cast
Judging looks at you -
They might be looks of wonder.
The little things we think are downfalls
Might imply something else
To different people -
Something beautiful.
So your shine
Is your fame
And your eclipse
Makes your frame
You.
Great. lunar Eclipse or Eclipse is a matter of mind. It is short time. No matter. But the earth watches it quietly with high esteem. Because it is the one which gives light in the night which is switched off by some one and slowly the sky becomes darker . It will again switched on after sometime and slowly Moon comes out with bright and beautiful. Similarly , if a man come across various problems and overshadowed by troubles and go into darkness , definitely the same man will one day rise like a Phoenix! That is reality!*Wait for light to clear our mind!
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Babu Thatha
Great. lunar Eclipse or Eclipse is a matter of mind. It is short time. No matter. But the earth watches it quietly with high esteem. Because it is the one which gives light in the night which is switched off by some one and slowly the sky becomes darker . It will again switched on after sometime and slowly Moon comes out with bright and beautiful. Similarly , if a man come across various problems and overshadowed by troubles and go into darkness , definitely the same man will one day rise like a Phoenix! That is reality!*Wait for light to clear our mind!
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Babu Thatha
Movement and rotation of Sun ,moon ,earth may cause eclipse.The science and the shadow are true still it gives a true message through your poem . What a thought and comparison Shriyandhaa.excellant writing.keep it up.
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Pushpa patti
Great attempt by the young Shriya
ReplyDeleteShe cares so much for all and empathize with the moon in this poem to analyse the comment from various ill informed observers
It's an Excellent experience from the young mind
Congratulations to all of you
From Sathyanarayanan Uncle
I am able to visualise the moon’s heart through you. But isn't he the night king. We gaze upon his every phase and wait for him after amavasa. Isn't he the big one who is cool and surrounded by stars in the vast sky giving us light. Hi moon we love you . They can cover you only few hours.
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Hi Shriyandha, so proud to read this poem that has been coined by a young and fresh mind.Stunned by your analysis and your comparison with human behaviour.
ReplyDeleteAwesome ...Best wishes to you dear kuttyma.
From Pushkala
Beautiful. Especially I like that "perception on perfection"
ReplyDeleteSriyanthaa's level of perception is amazing.
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Kailasam uncle
Wonderful Shriyan. Nicely articulated. God bless you.
ReplyDeleteJust as waxing & waning are two different phases of the same moon, so are the pains & Joys part of the same Nature.....
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Best attemptπ.........Savi Patti ( pushpa Patti's friend)
Very good composition by Shriyandhaa!
ReplyDeleteYoung mind's observation is very clear. Convey my Congrats to herπππππ₯°
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Savithri Aunty