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The Secret of The Bounce

 With each ounce of force you give,

It bounces higher and higher,

With each bounce a fall,

And each retraction a success to be recalled.

 

Even a miniscule ball, with a world a 100 times bigger,

Will try harder each time, to soar higher and higher.

If even an over-active, tiny ball can overcome failure,

Let me ask: why can't you too be a trier?


If you can get put out,

By the failure that puts you down,

You can easily spring back up,

Turn your frown upside down.


With each fail a trampoline,

With each hard fall an energetic pounce,

When your feet touch the ground,

Full of power, back up you bounce.


Failure is the biggest help,

You can get to reach success.

Because each time it drops you down,

It boosts your desperation, bringing it to excess.


And with that excess desperation,

You might want to try harder.

With better resources and mindsets the next time,

Higher up you'll fly, you'll reach farther.


See, you learn from your mistakes,

You don't let them discourage you,

With the bouncing balls of your feet,

Make stories of your success come true.


And in the end, an important note:

I'll give you one secret to success, just see,

I know it's true, and my brain said and I quote:

"Success wants your self-belief."






Comments

  1. Wow what a message Shriyandhaa. The secret of your success is in your mind to take the failure as a lesson . The poetic language with wonderful words really attracts me. May God bless you

    From
    Pushpa Patti

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  2. Babyyy!!! What a beautiful parallel you’ve drawn between a bouncing ball and a human !!! Amazing ! This goes to show your broad outlook and the perceptiveness to be able to draw inspiration from something as mundane as a bouncing ball, and be able to tie it to such a beautiful message! I am in awe of your thoughts, kanna!!
    Unlike a ball which , on hitting the ground every time , loses a bit of its energy and thus the height either every bounce , humans usually bounce back with twice the energy , twice the grit and twice the determination . Any person who is able to do this, has definitely understood the mantra for success! It is very heartening to see that at a young age of 11 , you have understood this secret sauce to the recipe of success !!
    Loads of love to you kanna!! ❤️ ❤️

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  3. Fine. Your write up is very good . Any Failure will upset everyone. But you have taken it in a positive manner and gave a beautiful poem to take the failure as a stepping stone which will help us to achieve sucess. Nice use of words. Bouncing ball is a great idea. Let your positive Ball bounce with full energy and continue to bounces to achieve great heights of success

    Babu Thatha

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  4. Lovely Shriyandhaa! So proud of you! Just the attitude people need these days... The resilience to bounce back with determination to taste success! So well written in your poem. Congratulations!

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  5. Wonderful darling. Very good one and nicely articulated and communicated the secret of success in life for everyone. God bless you dear.

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  6. Well said. Yes, SELF BELIEF is the key. I could see that you are 'self belief' personified.
    KAILASAM. K

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  7. I like the line
    Failure is the biggest help
    Yes. It improves you and guide you to success.
    Motivating lines

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  8. Excellent. Keep going to the best like this forever. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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  9. Hi Shriyandha,this is Pushkala ,pushpa paati friend
    Whatta a lovely comparison between the bouncing ball and the efforts one need to exert for reaching success. I'm awestruck by your imagination and flow of thoughts that runs through in poetic form. Great job.
    You are a stunner keep going.
    All the best kannamaa๐ŸŽ‰

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  10. Hi Shriyandhaa this is Sujatha Ur Pushpa Patti's friend NO words to express my appreciation What a wonderful and matured thought in this age God bless u with more Laurels ๐Ÿ’–

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  11. Hi Shriyandhaa I am Sujatha ur Patti's friend Superbly written U have such a matured thought in this age God bless u with bright future

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