Every night, I bring myself
To stare up at the sky -
But turn back home, with a frown on my face,
Clouds blocking stars, showing wry.
Every morning, I peek out the window
To marvel at the sea above -
But turn away, losing hope,
Cotton figures, masking what I love.
Every time I see the clouds,
I curse them, with all might,
They don't deserve to be up there,
Ruining the bright days and starry nights.
And one day, the clouds finally went away,
And I stargazed in much peace.
But suddenly, the sky felt a bit empty -
Although dotted by the stars, without fake fleece.
In the mornings, the sun burnt the pavements -
And something inside me missed watching
The white shapes that merrily float past -
I didn't realise they had much meaning.
Though much couldn't be seen, they brought
A wholesome feeling - that you probably can't see -
You only can, when one day,
The clouds decide to flee.
There's beauty in everything, and without each -
That you see, everyday, it seems unsettling -
So take a moment to understand,
What your clumps of flying fleece really mean to say.
What a beautiful poem , kannama!!! One can draw so, so, SO many parallels between this and our lives !! Yes , sometimes it seems like clouds do block our vision and make the whole environment gloomy. However, it is only when the sun glares down at us that we start missing the clouds. Every little thing , good or bad , that we go through or come across in like , brings with it some lesson which makes us a better person!
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem pattu ❤️ Keep writing more and more !!
Loads and loads of love,
Shyam aunty
Writing a poem is a gift.Especially observing Nature and wring a poem is special gift.Ending the poem with a message is an extraordinary gift.I love your way of writing and feeling proud Shriyandhaa .May God bless you
ReplyDeleteFrom
Pushpa Patti
Lovely kid. Keep writing. Good thought. Interesting conception. There is a saying in Native Tamil Language: the value of a shade can be appreciated when u r in the hot sun. No?
ReplyDeleteMind is clouded by good and bad thoughts. Good thoughts are like clear bright blue clouds moving fast. Darkened clouds bring us fear or worry. Whether it is going to rain ? If so, will it be heavy? But rain is also necessary for all of us. Make Hay while sunshines, that goes the proverb. But rain or shine you go on observe the nature and write a poem with a message. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteBabu thatha
As usual fantastic
ReplyDeleteSo adorable poems written by my bestie .. keep it up bro .
ReplyDeleteBy Sai shreesha
Hi akka
ReplyDeleteKeep writing these beautiful poems , keep rocking
By Sai Shivani ( sister of Sai)
Beautiful poem. What a clarity of thought with choice of words. Every creation of HIS has a meaning. You understand it when you realize HIM.
ReplyDeleteAnusha Sreeram
My thoughts are echoed by babu thatha. Keep going to nature everyday sree🩷
ReplyDelete