After a long, exhausting day, the only thing all of us look forward to is SLEEP. So, as soon as you finish off the last crumbs on your dinner plate, you fling yourself onto your bed, rest yourself in a comfortable position, get your pillow nice and fluffed up, and throw the blankets on yourself. But then...
You just realised that you still have your big, wobbly earrings on. So you throw back the blankets and remove your earrings and leave them in their box. And then you're back in your bed, and just as your eyelids are about to close...
You realise that you haven't brushed your teeth. So, yet again, your throw back the blankets and get off the bed, letting the annoying, creaky sound fill your head. And then you throw open the door to your bathroom, get your brush ready and squeeze toothpaste onto it, but...
The tube seemed to have a hole on the back, which you sadly hadn't noticed. And you get toothpaste all over your hands. Fuming, you wash your hands and get things done. And again, you're back in your bed, tucked comfortably back into the blankets. And exactly when your eyelids close and your brain is about to drift off to sleep...
You realise that you're still in your extra frilly, sweaty and super long gown. After releasing an incredibly exasperated sigh, you throw back the blanket, get off bed and head to the closet to get changed. Soon enough, you're back in the bed, with the blankets back on, and half-asleep already, when...
You hear your phone chime. And your eyes snap back open, when you just realised you haven't logged into Duolingo yet. And then, you throw back the blankets aggressively, positively annoyed by the fact that something's always keeping you from falling asleep. After a boring French lesson, you tuck yourself back in bed. But you're unable to find sleep...
You get yourself a glass of water. Then go back to bed. Still unable to sleep, you try adjusting your position.
Still no sleep.
You get more water.
Still no sleep.
You listen to soothing, calming bedtime music.
Still no sleep.
Finally, you get fed up and just lie in your bed, idle, sleepless, with a scowl placed on your face. And like, 5 minutes later, you hear your alarm blaring, striving to wake you up.
And just then, you realised, that you had finally slept, for not 5 minutes, but 10 hours. But when you hop out of bed, you realised...
Your earrings were still on.
Your extra frilly, sweaty and super long gown was still on you.
Your phone constantly chiming, with Duolingo sending you messages that you forgot to do your lesson and lost your streak.
The glass of water was not on your bedside table.
And all those stuff which had stopped you from sleeping, well, they were all part of a dream.
Now I feel sleepy on reading that you had 10hrs slept with sweet dreams. Super write up Shriyandhaa
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Pushpa Patti
A dream filled with activities. Nice write up. Keep writing. God bless you
ReplyDeleteSuper Shriyandhaa π π God bless u with bright future
ReplyDeleteWhat a dream. Wonderful shriyandhaa. Keep rocking.my blessings to you.
ReplyDeleteSuper creative!
ReplyDeleteNice write up God bless you Shriyandhaa
ReplyDeleteThis is from Uppili kalyani mami
Nice writing. May God bless her with more talent.
ReplyDeleteThis from KV. Revathi my school friend
Super Shryaandha..a good write up with a twist at the end. Your style & usage of words mark a voracious reader. Hope you take up writing. Choice of Font too is beautiful....from balaji thatha
ReplyDeleteThis is from my office friend Balaji Sr. AO. He is a writer of stories
Very nice Pushpa Superb presentation πππ God bless her with bright future
ReplyDeleteThis is from my school friend Sujatha
It is like an interesting story so poetic and realistic. I bow my head to her imagination. Wow great goingπ
ReplyDeleteThis is from my school friend vagulamala
Super writeup. Enjoyed dreaming.ππ»ππ»ππ»
ReplyDeleteThis from office friend Radha Bangalore
Excellent write up with a super unexpected twist at the end. Keep it up, Shriyandha ππΌ
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This is from US Lalitha madam my office friend
Oh my God!! I started to feel sorry every time you mentioned one or the other unfinished work just as sleep started setting in !!! However , that’s very true and I relate to it completely! But do think about the beauty of human brain - whenever there is some important yet unfinished task at hand, no matter how close you are to sleeping , or even if you’ve drifted off to sleep, brain sends out that alarm sooner or later and makes you wake up with a jerk !!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write up , kannama!!! Thoroughly loved reading it !!
As usual wonderful writeup by the potential poetess of JAKRS family.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations dear Shriyandhaa.
This is from Padhmanabhan kollu thatha
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ReplyDeleteThis is from Sampathkumar kollu thatha
Shriyandhaa's description about her dreamworld (Swapnavastha) is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteIt reflects her Nature....a young and efficient little girl who's dutybound and contemplative!
Her other write--ups viz....
'Lord Rama is Back',
'Hanuman' & 'NewYear 2024' are also excellent!
She has proved her Heritage!ππ
Kudos to Shriyandhaaπ₯°
This is from my senior office friend retd Savithri madam
Excellent Shriyandhaa. Keep it up.p
ReplyDeleteSooper Shriyandha! So many musings inside your tiny head! ππππ
ReplyDeleteFrom Latha Sundar office friend
Excellent write up. God bless her. πππππ€π€
ReplyDeleteFrom Shankari madam office friend
Madam
ReplyDeleteSuperb
A deep analysis of a School girl's activities and problems
A good narrative and prolific writing
Please convey our congratulations to the Parents and to tell her to continue writing without inhibitions
This is from Sathyanarayanan sir now he is in US
Superb writing Shriyandhaa....Nice imagination...Great....Keep it up
ReplyDeleteHi Shriyandha, spell bound by your write up. Amazing and very expressive. Your caption ..Long LOST Sleep made me feel that you were sleep deprived. But the twist at the end mm adr me feel happy. God bless u dear. I am an ardent fan of your writings πππ
ReplyDeleteWonderful write up Shriyandhaa, as always. Keep it up. With Blessings!
ReplyDeleteExcellent very very super Shriyan. I appreciate your imagination in all ur writings. MayGod bless you my dear Shriyan. Anbudan viji Patti.
ReplyDeleteExcellent, God bless you dear - Mala Sekar
ReplyDeleteDream is never ends. Everyday we dream but that is all waste. Your Lost dream is wonderful. One day your Dreams become true. But wishes or wants should be in a rightful way and God will bless you to make your dreams come true. Pray and dream in the right way will help to be good and happy and make other Happy.
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