Lightning is that which intimidates,
But thunder is that which wishes
To follow lightning.
That is to say,
Thunder follows lightning's path,
But reaches a different destination.
But thunder can be far more intimidating -
You don't need to see it to believe it.
But aren't we told to not blindly believe
Whatever we hear?
For all we know, the "thunder" we heard,
Could just be the bark of a very large dog.
But lightning is something we see -
But can we believe everything we see?
Perhaps the lightning is just
The lights, somewhere in the sky
Fluctuating.
But if we can't rely on thunder
Or lightning
What if they're both played together?
Though thunder always follows,
Never leads or walks beside,
Surely, we can believe
If we see it, and hear it.
But how great could the coincidences be?
No, to believe it, you must feel it -
And not just a mere inkling -
Something genuine - something you truly believe.
Something you're not forced to believe,
Just by the proof
Laid for every sense.
But if we can't differentiate
Our genuine thoughts, from kindled ones -
Then what can we believe?
Wonderful thought and words Shriyandhaa. . Sound and light through Thunder and Lightning
ReplyDeleteLinking with human blind belief or not to blindly believe and ending with the quention mark making the reader to think really surprises me about your wisdom at your age. You are a blessed poet. Iam proud about you.
From
Pushpa patti
Super ma. Keep writing. Now you have wandered into the realm of philosopy. Great for such a young girl. Kudos
ReplyDeleteLove the juxtaposition ! Brilliant observation of what we are told and what we believe.
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing
ReplyDeleteGreat thinking at this age
God bless her with abundant achievement in future
Our blessings Asirvathams to your grand daughter
Baby and vaidehi
From your kolluthatha and Patti aged above 80
Good poem!
ReplyDeleteIt's always the experience which reassures the belief!
To experience what we believe in life is the very design of Nature!
Convey my Congrats to your gr.dr Shriyandhaa 👏👌💐
From my office friend Savithri madam aged 70
Just by the proof laid for every sense - though it seems philosophical so much un derlying science .Great . keen Observation making people to appreciate the Universe , words are in such a way that even the people who are at the verge of ‘vrakthi’ will be interested to be ‘alive’. Oh So much is there, Kudos. Prayers, Best Wishes and Blessings to this Great Wonderful little Guru👋👋❤️
ReplyDeleteFrom my friend Sundareswari Worias Professor in SRM Engineering college aged above 60
A new dimension to analysis of Lightning and Thunder
ReplyDeleteShe has inherited great qualities and applies her mind on different observations with new approach
It's a typical quality of budding Scientists and to reflect them poetically is a great Art
Excellent
God bless you all
From our office friend Sathyanarayanan sir
Hi Shriyandha,u stun the readers with your poem,your analytical skills ,comparing the nature to human minds and perception is really incredible.Hats off to you kuttima. Great going. Best wishes from Pushkala paati
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