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The Rain Sonnet

 (Italian/Petrarchan Sonnet - ABBAABBA CDCCDC)


Rain, now, rain,

Drip from the sky and weather so mellow,

With each drop leaving behind a lasting echo,

As I watch the downpour from my windowpane,

Pour too hard then you're a pain,

Causing storms that we do not desire,

And when you want to be you're too dire,

But do reach the ground with certain restrains.


When you arrive, come over with a soothing breeze,

We need you to nurture tender plants,

Your cold, pacifying water for the trees, 

Your calm, melodic pace will ease, 

Many racing minds, and can break any trance,

Rain down all you want, set yourself free.


Comments

  1. T.SrinivasanSeptember 21, 2024 at 4:40 PM

    Very good write up. It is hot at Srirangam. But it is raining at Chennai. We all experiencing Very Very Hot climate for a couple of weeks. A great relief to those who are in Chennai. The Rain had produced coolness in your heart and comes out in the form of poem. Great . Keep it up.

    Babu Thatha.

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  2. T.SrinivasanSeptember 21, 2024 at 8:59 PM

    Every human from child to old Enjoys every drop of Rain water . Few address their enjoyment through poems and one among them is shriyandhaa. Iam a fan of your rythemic words and of course with a message. Super shriyandhaa your rain poem made me cool. Keep pouring!
    From Pushpa Patti

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  3. PushkalaSeptember 22, 2024 at 5:18 PM

    Hi Shriyandha
    Wonderful sonnet on Rain🎉🌟🤗
    Esp the last line in the poem ..is :"Ultimate'. God bless you with good health and happiness always 🙏

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  4. ChellaSeptember 22, 2024 at 6:31 PM

    Excellent description of rain
    Keep going

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  5. Sahana RaghuramanSeptember 23, 2024 at 5:57 PM

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