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Stars

 Shining in the vast night sky,

I see them from afar.

Dominated by the brighter moon,

There glimmer the stars.


Mostly hidden by the cruel shadows,

Or by the thick, misty clouds.

But they do not give up, they still glimmer on,

They make their voice be heard loud.


Even though they're hardly seen,

Even though they're hardly thought of,

They know that someday they will be,

Thought of, honoured and loved.


So take an inspiration from stars,

Show your true essence,

Continue to shimmer, ignore the darkness,

Because one day it'll fear your presence. 

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  1. Shyamala NJuly 14, 2024 at 10:24 AM

    Absolutely wonderful poem da pattu!! Yes , the one that shines on despite the surrounding darkness is the true star! A person with true grit and determination will stay on his path despite any obstacles that come his way, and finally prove himself. One should not be deterred by any negative comments that one might face! After all, the beautiful lotus flower that adorns the Lotus Feet of Almighty, grows amidst the swamps and mud, doesn’t it?
    Excellent writing as usual, full of perspective , kanna ! May God bless you abundantly !!
    Loads of love,
    Shyamala Aunty

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  2. AnonymousJuly 14, 2024 at 10:26 AM

    Excellent.I pray to Almighty to bless you always and make you a super star writer and win the hearts of everybody and your writings give awareness to to those who are in sad and sorrowful world.

    Babu Thatha

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  3. T.SrinivasanJuly 14, 2024 at 12:59 PM

    Your observations of Nature and your thoughts and comparison and expressing in words with a message to the human kind is a gift by God. Keep writing .your pure heart and mind is your strength. Good job shriyandhaa
    From
    Pushpa Patti

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  4. AnonymousJuly 14, 2024 at 1:05 PM

    Super Shriyandha. Keep rocking. God bless you tobe a shining star always.

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  5. Chella SubramanianJuly 14, 2024 at 1:06 PM

    Fabulous comparison. Keep going

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  6. Subhashree auntyJuly 14, 2024 at 5:39 PM

    Super Shriyandhaa...Simple writing but still it has a message in it...Great kanna. Keep writing....
    Subhashree aunty

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  7. MedhaJuly 14, 2024 at 8:42 PM

    Great job!!

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  8. JayasreeJuly 15, 2024 at 10:56 AM

    All of us see stars and wonder its presence....never ever thought the way perceive it .....you get get positive inspiration from everything you see around which is a great quality....keep rocking child

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  9. Pushkala GopalJuly 16, 2024 at 5:22 AM

    Dear Shriyandha, you are a sparkling star, in your expression, writing and drawing comparison from nature.👍👏Great job. U r truly an inspiration to many kids of your age . God has blessed u with This talent and your usage of words is really astonishing.

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